Luis A. Amaya

Denver, CO

Just a nerd who loves creating stories. I want to pursue a career in film and writing where I can see my characters come to life.

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Good Intro

I like your introduction to the story. What makes a good ghost story is the tragedy the person went through and that's exactly what you did. Keep working on your story and proof read your work. Good job!

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Interesting writing style

You have an interesting writing style. I'll be honest, there were a few times I got lost in the story and had to re-read some lines. Other than that, I think it had a good flow. which made me keep on reading. I can see the story of the Seeker in a video game. Overall good job.

Last note: Badass cover photo!

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I like it!

I enjoy a good werewolf story. A good start so far. The grammar and punctuation needs some work, but other than that you got a good story so far. Keep it going!

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Fun Read

The story has some humor which makes it easier and fun to read. I've enjoyed your writing style for this and the characters are interesting as well. I personally am not a big fan of dragons/fantasies stories like these but it's a good story so far. Keep it going!

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