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Live, Laugh, Love~ Until the end

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Bittersweet

An accurate portrayal of affections felt so strongly on one side yet carelessly on the other. I went into this cheerful and left quite disheartened. This is truly a nice, brief piece of work I think many can relate to!

If you're looking for a poem about the bitter side of false love, this is it.

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Haha!

I genuinely enjoyed reading this. I was drawn in by the picture and simple description from the start.

I'll admit I was confused at some parts concerning minor details, but that's due more to my own lack of knowledge than anything else! I had a real good laugh several times. The comedy in the dialogue, situational humor, and descriptions were good. I was almost dying at one point because of what occurred.

All in all, a well made piece that brightened my day for sure. I was so stressed out until I read this.

I highly recommend this story for anyone who's looking to laugh out loud.

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