LylaWaring

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I really enjoyed this story. The plot is fantastic and the use of language gave me a clear and beautiful image of the surroundings and characters. The imagery is great and I really recommend this story. The ending was somewhat vague, but I liked it because it is mysterious and keeps the reader thinking and it shows how the cycle continues. The dialogue in this story was refreshing. A good plot; I can only imagine what happened to the poor character at the end...

All in all, if you are interested in horror and fantasy and have the time to read this story, then do so!

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