Lynette

An Exceptionally Crafted Thriller Romance Piece

It's great! It's pretty fast. And the chemistry between the leads, Angel and Theo is also intense. But it also gives a sense of danger. It is really good in giving the fearsome and dangerous vibes. It's a gripping tale with those little half spoilers popping up. I really like that writing style. The way you show the readers a little light and shut them up in the cupboard again compelling them to try to come out, themselves. Though, the first chapter's grammar and stuff can confuse, but I do recommend to not stop. It gets better. As you move forward, the chemistry gets intense and dangerous, and the story becomes more dark.

Compelling

This is like a real novel, the hard ones I used read before the pandemic. The writing style is smooth. The grammar is great.
And honestly, I have never read anything related to this genre. This was my first. And I loved it😍😍. I couldn't stop flipping the pages. It's a great book. I think you should consider publishing this.
With love,
Maria.

P.S. Are you an actual, professional writer?

A magical journey

I haven't completed the book, but it got me so hooked, I just got scolded by my parents, for not attending my class properly. But still I thought, I will go after writing the review. I simply love it.
The way every character has its own unfolding, and significance.
The story is magical, pun intended. It's a great ride of emotions. And, I love YAs, so I would just recommend this book to anyone who loves a good YA Romance fantasy🥰🥰

A magical journey

I haven't completed the book, but it got me so hooked, I just got scolded by my parents, for not attending my class properly. But still I thought, I will go after writing the review. I simply love it.
The way every character has its own unfolding, and significance.
The story is magical, pun intended. It's a great ride of emotions. And, I love YAs, so I would just recommend this book to anyone who loves a good YA Romance fantasy🥰🥰

Breezy

The plot can be called repetitive, BUT, I am the BIGGEST fan of death related stories. I really liked this. The grammar has few mistakes, but I think that's absolutely OK. The plot is good. I liked the writing style. It's a good book if you liked the fault in our stars or five feet apart.

Short and Sweet

This book is amazing for fans of Harry Potter, more importantly, Luna Lovegood. I am a big fan. So I love her. The grammar and writing style also doesn't have any problem. It is a short story, which is very entertaining. You love Luna Lovegood, and her personality you will love this. Just a piece of advice. Add chapters of them playing muggle games. And it will be more fun. Extend the book more. I know you will do it the best. :)

Great YA

Above anything, this book is a source of nostalgia for me. Considering this situation, and all. Leaving that it's a great high school romance book, considering the amount of awkwardness. The writing style is good but, in the 3rd or 4th chapter you had added your own opinion as the narrator. That's good but I suggest you stay a little consistent. Because after that you never included yourself in the story. So I think you should choose if you want to be a part of the story or not. The grammar can be improved but that's OK. Lastly, it is great because it is pretty relatable. So I recommend you to read this book if you are missing school, or want to relive your memories.
P.S. Just my brutal honesty, not me, my brutal honesty wants to say that the book cover and title is great but till now I haven't, I mean my brutal honesty hasn't found a relation between them.