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Vault 111, The Commonwealth

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5 Stars

I liked this more than I thought I would- a nice, but short post-Hogwarts piece that didn't downplay or insult anyone- a rare find most days as, more often than not, these types of fics devolve into some sort of bashing.

I liked this version of grown up Ron and Harry. The excitable Colin Jr was a nice touch, though when he was first introduced, I had wondered why he didn't seem to recognize Ron. After all, there was little Harry did in Hogwarts without Ron and/or Hermione. Even still, with Harry being a primary hero in the war against Voldemort, Ron would have been well known by his association with Harry, rather than be one of the "unsung" heroes like Snape.

In any case, like I said, I liked this more than I expected to. There isn't much to it, but that wasn't really the point of it- just two guys who were old friends relaxing in a way that most would not expect them to. All in all, a nice glimpse into a nice alternate future (seeing as canon!Colin died at the Second Battle of Hogwarts).

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Hilarious

Nice little one shot that had me laughing almost the entire read through. Reading the title, I had automatically assumed that the names Arthur, Lancelot or Merlin would be thrown about. I do have to agree that naming a kid Excalibur would be kid of cool, if not more than a little bit ridiculous.

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Good

I liked this story despite having never watched Noir. It was easy to follow and the story, overall, was great. Personally, I thought the ending could have used a bit more... Something, but on the whole, it was okay.

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Excellent

I've read this fic several times over the past few years, it's definitely one of the best, one that sets the bar for any Poker!fic in any Category/sub-Category, whether or not they are Harry Potter fics, or fics of another fandom.

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