MKBoyce11

Behind Your Shower Curtain

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i promise

“What did you drop?” He asks while staring at the rushing water. I kept silent. “I get it, but be careful of what you’re getting yourself into. Trust me. This is not the life you want.” He sighed...

Thriller / Action by MKBoyce11 • Ongoing • 6 chapters

ENZO & AURORA by butterflykiss
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Could Be So Much Better

The punctuation is almost ridiculous. The storyline is all over the place. The writing style is just not giving what it should provide. The story is giving Wattpad very much for beginners.
This could be so much better. I'd suggest reading a couple of stories like this and trying to rewrite 'Enzo and Aurora.
Great story cover! But sadly, I would not recommend.

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A Subs Life by Hales
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A Subs Life

I'm not exactly sure why, put I was really pulled into this story

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