Mae_Thann

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Kudos!

First off, I want to congratulate you on getting me interested enough to read the whole book!
Second, great job on the characters, particularly Bensin and Steene. You really connected me to them and I felt their highs and lows alike.
Third, the story itself was engaging. I love a good sibling story, especially one with such drive. Plus, you didn't lose me in the sports portions, nor did your climax bore (I actually stayed up later than usual in order to read chapters 19-23).
Keep up the good work!

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enjoyable

First off, kudos on a good, hooking summary and opener! I enjoyed watching the plotline unfold and, even though I don't care about boat details, they definitely added to the authenticity. My only complaint, really, is that the villain spilled everything about his involvement with the mob. Aside from that, I found it quite enjoyable!

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