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I really enjoyed this! It expands on betrayal and trickery. I loved how Bellatrix and Narcissa switched sides due to a change of heart, as did Draco. The plot was very interesting, like how Voldemort was able to possess Hermione. Great ideas! Continue writing!

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AMAZING!

This is absolutely one of the best fan fictions I've ever read! I loved the plot twist (Dumbledore being a traitor) and all, and I thought that you have a fantastic imagination.

I loved how you put Luna and Harry together! Please, continue writing!

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