Maissa Vale

Hi Maissa,
thank you for following me. I really appreciate it!

Hi! I’m looking for honest and constructive feedback on my story, Perspective.
This is a personal writing project that I’ve been working on and improving over time. I’d really appreciate it if you could read it and tell me honestly what you think—not just about what works, but also about what doesn’t.
I’d especially like feedback on the story, characters, pacing, suspense, atmosphere, dialogue, emotional moments, and overall flow. If something feels confusing, rushed, predictable, unrealistic, or unnecessary, please tell me. Don’t worry about being too critical—I’d rather know what needs improvement.
You don't have to focus only on grammar. I mainly want to know how the story feels to you as a reader and whether it keeps you interested.
This is still a work in progress, so your feedback may help me decide what needs to be changed, expanded, or rewritten.
Thank you for taking the time to read Perspective. I genuinely appreciate your honesty.

Maissa, thank you for following! I took a look at your page — three books, and one of them is about a room nobody talks about? That's the kind of title that makes me curious.

I don't usually read romance, but I can tell you're building worlds with heart. Wishing you good readers and a good journey here. And if you ever want to talk stories — I'm here.

Thank you for the follow I really appreciate it ❤️🤍🖤

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