Makawa

Ah, back to inconsistent updates. I wish you the best Makawa, but I’m officially retiring this story.

When is the next update😊

I’m beyond happy for the updates but I’m confused on how long the affair was happening he said a couple of months but how long was the affair

Good morning, dear readers! I’m seeing some negative reactions regarding the shift in writing style. I’m not very experienced when it comes to third-person narration and the direct dialogue required at this stage. Sarah certainly isn't just going to sit around feeling sorry for herself—which is why direct dialogue is essential right now, even if it differs slightly from the book's earlier style.



I’m a novice writer, okay? My background is in engineering—numbers, haha. But it’s frustrating when people claim it’s AI-generated. I write after work, and it takes time and creativity. I’ve had to change direction a few times throughout the story because you’re all very sharp, and I didn’t want you predicting my next moves. As a result, parts that were already finished are being altered, though I don’t want to abandon my original vision.



I agree with the feedback that the story slowed down a bit, though one reader noted that it sped up and then returned to a normal pace—which they liked. I take everything you say into account, haha. But I also can't skip over certain details. Sarah has just fled to another city, bought a new house, and filed for divorce. I have to sketch out the beginning of a new life for her, and things like that can't happen too quickly.

Some things on this platform still confuse me. Some edits apparently didn't go through, and I chose to leave them as is because they involved details that might have caused minor contradictions for readers further along in the book. You guys are devouring the chapters, hahaha.

Also, the book is free for everyone, just as I promised. Signing up is optional—a way to support me. A big thank you to my dear subscribers as well. If you’re paying for the book on a platform that stole it, well... I’m sorry, haha.



Thanks to those who want to keep reading. There’s a difference between constructive criticism and tearing down someone’s work, so I felt it was important to have this chat with you all. Big hug!

Hi Makawa, I’ve posted plenny here and feel like an a**hole every time I do, but when can we expect the next batch of chapters? I know you mentioned previously that Tuesdays are tough for you.

When is the rest of the chapters coming out of

Loved the new chapters! Can’t wait for more.

Good morning, dear readers! I see that everyone is very eager for the upcoming chapters, and that places a great deal of responsibility on me hahaha.



In my previous update, I intended to post the entire story at once, but I want to gauge your reactions as we go. I’ve just released a larger batch of chapters to satisfy your curiosity with the content you’ve all been waiting for.Please follow me here; I notice that many of you reading the book aren't followers yet.



As previously promised, everyone will have free access to the book. All chapters released so far are free to read, and I won't be locking the book behind a subscription paywall.

The idea of ​​monetizing the book only came up because someone stole my story and was selling it on other platforms. That was one of the reasons for my hiatus.

The only platform where the book is available is right here on Inkitty. If I decide to move to another platform, you’ll be the first to know. If you see the story anywhere else, please report it or let me know.



Finally, for those who wish to support me, I’ve set up several supporter tiers (Tiers 1 through 4). For now, this is entirely optional. I never imagined writing could be a source of income, but who knows—maybe one day it will be.



Once this story concludes, others will follow—though not necessarily related to this current book.

Feel free to share your thoughts however you like; I’m always paying attention to your feedback. Please like and comment!

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