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Great Writing
This story is very clearly going somewhere big! I can't wait for more plot development, but I honestly can say wherever it goes the author has the talent to make it big. The characters are each distinct, and the organization of this story is top tier. I do think there will be a lot of romance, which for me isn't usually the genre I like, but the author is doing a great job of developing it. There were no glaring grammatical or technical issues. I love Cassie! You have done a great job developing her character. Also the sibling dynamic is super well written between Cassie and Jason!
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