Marina 👻

21 year old dog mom and book lover ❤️ Here to meet and support other readers and writers 😁 I appreciate any feedback so I can better my writing and would love to do the same for others.

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Great plot!

This story has a great start so far. I really like the plot and how the chapters go back and forth between the two main character’s perspectives. The author has successfully written two completely different personalities and made them both believable and realistic. I’m hooked so far and excited to see what happens next in this book. 👍🏻

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Very entertaining!

This book has kept me engaged from the very beginning. There’s plenty of action but there’s also a good and detailed plot going on as well. I also like the characters and how they are developing as the story goes on. Overall it’s been a really good read and I can’t wait to see why happens next!

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A beautiful read

This book was so wonderfully written. The characters were complex and lovable. The plot was exciting and kept me hooked the whole way through. The romance is sweet and emotional. And the humor is the cherry on top of everything. This was definitely worth the read and I encourage anyone who enjoys a good romance to dive into this book. 😁

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Amazing

This book hooked me right away and just keeps getting more and more interesting with each chapter. I love all the mystery and darkness in it that leaves me guessing. The characters are complex and very human. The writing style is descriptive, elegant, and beautiful. I’m exited to continue reading and see where it goes.

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Great!

I enjoyed reading this story! The plot was simple, leaving more focus on the characters which I liked. I also liked the romance in it. It was very sweet and nice to read. I think if I had any criticism it would just be that some of it seems a bit over simplified or but overall it’s a really nice story :) good job, can’t wait to see what happens next!

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Great first chapter!

This was a really good first chapter. I love the overall fairytale aspect of it. Your main character is very kind and likeable whereas the male interest seems complex and slightly mysterious. I am excited to see where you go with this and read your next chapters. :)

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