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Innovative book

I am agreeably surprised with this story. The author is able to introduce with mastership sentiments and some human passions on virtual characters .
In every chapter the mystery is just discovered when it is needed to perfectly follow the plot..
Luis and Lydia are adorable characters and one finish loving them.
Mr. Manuel Alfonseca, being an Spanish writer, has a fantastic dominion of the English language.
One thing I would like to indicate, which probably is only one impression of me: I didn´t understand well the transference process of Lydia from her real world to the virtual world.
But still the fiction story is very original.
I recommend to whom is interested in such type of fiction stories that don´t forget to read it.

Ernesto Cubero

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