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Awesome, but sometimes confusing

Overall the story idea is amazing! The concept is great and how you present it really appeals to me. The only downside is that I sometimes can not figure out who says what or does what. Sometimes it's a guessing game. If you improve on that part you could elevate your work immensely.

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