Well that was amazing! The story is very good and the characters are so different and so well thought out. Everything was exceptionally well done, but I have a few comments and I hope you don't take them personally. I also know that this is an old story so you improved a lot and I'd like you to know that I'm currently reading the unexpected story you published and I'll leave my review soon I hope.
Read the story now
First things first, you should divide the story into paragraphs and pay closer attention to it's structure because it's easy for the reader to get lost when they are reading a big chunk of the chapter in just one paragraph.
Second, this story needs a little editing because there are a few mistakes here and there. They didn't cause any problems for me while reading it, but I thought I'd tell you just in case.
Overall this book is a 10 for me because I really love this type of storyline and the fact that the characters reminded me of one Direction is an added bonus (I love them so much lol)
Ps: I'm so sorry for being this late to write the review I promised you