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Wonderland

Darkened by the shadows of earth, adding to the darks of the world. But reflecting an image of heaven? Augmenting the hues of the skies.

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Nice little thing

It's a nice story. Easy going kinda stuff. You know the one that doesn't go all cray cray on you.

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Refreshing!

The old style of writing is beyond good for today's modern writing styles.

I loved the plot and the characters and I loved the way the character development was done. It was gradual and good. Not too good to believe nor too little to leave the book half read.

The grammar according to my reading experience was almost perfect except the occasional your-you're mistake that everyone does.

The plot could be smarter. Smart in a way that the main character is a born leader, They can be smarter and could have more ways to get to know about their enemies' plans more easily. I think that that character has more scope in the field of being smart enough to at least figure out some things that their enemy could be planning. (Tried to be as vague as I could so as to not give any spoilers :) )

I loved reading this book as it gives a good view of how times used to be well before my great-grandparents were born or something like that.

The stage set for the story is also very good in terms of the language used. I could totally imagine everything happening right in front of me. It was very believable and slow paced. But the slow pace helped a lot in the unfolding of the story.

A very good story I read in a while. You should totally publish it. I would no doubt buy it.

Thank you for giving enough time and hard work for creating this good story.

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Well thought out.

I never knew that one of my favourite childhood cartoons could turn into such a beautiful story. Tho there are many grammatical errors and writing errors, this story warmed my heart to 100%. I would definitely want this book to get published and I would also buy it. It’s amazing character development and plot gives reader something to hold onto and not get bored easily. It’s a addictive story. One that stirs something within you. One that makes you think. One that makes you question yourself. One that has a good view on what’s wrong with this world.

And it’s very well thought out. The author has done an amazing job on research before writing everything up.

It’s touched me a great amount because I’ve been through many similar things though not in all.

I’d recommend this story to those who have a deep emotional understanding and want to explore more in understanding different faces of human nature that are well thought out here.

A great amount of time well spent.

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