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I read up to chapter 5 and I think I fell in love with it as soon as I read more and more. I love the whole plot and the characters I love them. But something I do suggest if to be able to describe the characters faces a little more so while readers read your story they can imagine how they look like as soon as they see the name. But overall I think this story is good!

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