I really liked your story and really enjoyed what you were going for with this one! So, it's starts off a bit slow, but I understand it's one of those stories you have to look with another eye to know what will happen next. The middle gets even better with each new chapter and the story progresses with the symbolisms and the themes of each character. The ending is sweet, charming, and I was glad to have read a story that teaches us the true meaning of friendships and how they can go extremely well. With that being said, the writing quality is really good, the storytelling is strong, the characters are relatable and likable, the world background is great. Overall, I think you have done an excellent job with this story; it's quite good.
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