Minerva

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Very VERY interesting

The book is amazing. I didn't expect the futuristic world in the book to be so captivating. I love how the author used internal dialogues to help readers get to know the characters, it makes the character's descriptions become more natural, that's smart. I don't often use this kind of writing style because its hard to use for me, that's why I admire the author very much. The imagery is very descriptive without the over used of descriptive words.
Everything is great, but I would love to see more emotions in the characters. Please keep on the good work, my friend!

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Lovely

I like how the author described so many detail yet revealed so little information about the character. It really keep me reading. Looking forward to your next update!

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Very interesting

Erotica isn't really my cup of tea but I do like this book (not because of the xxx part of course, though the author described very detail and it sounds so much better than the xxx part of other books i have read). The plot development is great, character development and personality is something I would like to see more. Overall, I would recommend it if you're into the genre. And to the author: You nice, keep going!

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I LOVE THIS!

This is one of the best books I have ever read! The plot is so well-made, character developments are incredable! It gives me so many emotions, from sorrow and heart break to full happiness and satisfaction. The author's ways of words described everything so well, i felt like i could see what the character sees, feel what they feels and be in the spot where i could understand their everything, like i was going on that adventure with them reading this. Or by the lack of a better word, I LOVE IT!

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Wow

The story is very interesting! Creepypasta is not my jam but, ddaeng, I got hooked up by this. To the author: You nice, keep going!

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