Mirthxx

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I loved it, pure and simple. IT was inventive characters and animals and a great plot with a great opening for a sequel. Ch16 and 17 are swapped over and from there the spelling and grammar becomes a less settled as the first chapters, but I was so hooked on the story I didn't care. Roy is a great character surrounded by brilliant backgrounds and following a great plot. I look forward to seeing him grow into a man in the next chapter. Thank you for sharing.

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I was with you right up until we entered he'll and then it.got confusing but I am definitely intrigued and already backing KN for.the win and his sister. (want to slap his mother). it a playful and original story with a quirky accent.

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