C. Baxter

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Intriguing

I haven’t read many chapters. So please don’t be mad. There are a few grammatical errors here and there. Some very noticeable and others not so much.
Other than that it’s a very intriguing read. I’m very curious to see how it ends! Keep it up!
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Belle💛🌻

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Good Read

Enjoying this story so far. Some errors here and there but hardly noticeable when you want to just read and not critique. Keep up the great work 🌻
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Belle

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Brilliantly Executed

I want to just say I’m only on chapter 19, but wow!
You’ve given just enough information on each character and their secrets, that there isn’t this complete information overload. It’s just enough to keep you reading to learn more!
You’ve executed your thoughts brilliantly, and not once have I felt something is lacking. Or that I don’t want to read anymore.
I’d even go so far as to say this can help writers block. Your descriptions and continuous flow, make me want to write 10 chapters, but I can’t put your book down!
There are slight grammatical and punctuation errors, but hardly noticeable.
Absolutely loving it.
Xx Belle

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Love love love it!

So this is the first one of your books I chose to read! And I must say Dotty! I absolutely love love love this! I will defo be reading every single one now 🙈

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Wonderful

From what’s been given to us, I find this story very intriguing and I see so much potential for this to be one of the top reads. Please continue!
Xx Belle🌻

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👌🏼👌🏼

Really enjoyed your sample. Seems like it’s going to be a very interesting book. Xx

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Good bones

The story has some good bones, but the grammar and syntax throw me off.
I think it could be a really good story with a little bit of edits on grammar and sentence structure etc.
Keep writing

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Love this!

I absolutely loved this! It’s exactly the kind of thing I needed to read. Character development, drama, love - it’s all in there! 💛 can’t wait to read the second book

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Just brilliant!

You have such a way with words and a unique way of writing. It hooked me on the first chapter!
Absolutely loving this book!
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Belle 🌻

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Love this!

Absolutely love this story! The flow of the book, the characters. Everything works brilliantly together!
Can’t wait to read more!
Xx
Belle 🌻

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Intrigued

Story has really good bones. I really like this first chapter and what your aiming at.
There are a few grammar errors that need to be looked at, as well as syntax. Capitals for new sentences, spacing etc.
I would like to see some more descriptions on the characters. I believe that will really pull your readers in, knowing what the characters looks like helps people (like me) with a picture brain imagine then.
Overall well done! Please continue to write!
Xx
Belle 🌻💛

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Absolutely hooked

I’m so sorry it took me this long to read your book! But now that I have I am hooked!
You have such a unique writing skill, with minimal grammatical errors.
Please keep writing! I love your work!
Xx
Belle 🌻💛

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Wonderful

Okay so I read this book a while ago! But I decided it definitely warranted another read.
The storyline is so intriguing and really captures you as a reader. I felt so many emotions with the characters!
I just wish the book was completed so we can know what happens next!
I was so mad at Adriel for being angry and defensive and absolutely want to see Cami her what’s coming to her.

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Wonderful!

I love this book, you have done an amazing job showing your creativity.
Some grammatical errors here and there but all things considered this is a really good read.
Can’t wait to read more from you!
Xx
Belle 🌻💛

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Promising

This story is very promising. There needs to be some clean up with the tenses and grammar. As it get a little confusing when it jumps from present tense to past tense.
It is a little predictable but it has some good bones and I think if you sit and really read your book you can make some changes to it to keep people on their toes.
Keep writing and soon you’ll fully perfect your own voice!
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Belle 🌻💛

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Different

The writer has written this story very well. It isn’t a story you can just read and think you’ll completely understand. No, you need to have a cuppa and really keep your mind clear when reading it.
Overall really well doneX, I’d just say you need to look out for your grammar and syntax.
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Good book

I really like your story, it flows well. My only comments would be based on the grammar and syntax. Some instances I have to reread to understand what was written.
Other than that the story reads really well and I like how you’ve made it so that we read a bit from everyone. I especially like that it’s a grandmother telling her granddaughter about how she met the grandfather it’s really done well! 💛🌻

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Like it so far!

I’m unsure what to make of the story. I like it, but at the same time I feel it’s too much information.
The writing is good and minimal grammar errors.
If I could give some advice, maybe try re-looking at the storyline. Instead of going on a rant, maybe explain to us what she does. I’m still not sure what she does🙈
Keep up writing. I’d love to see where this goes
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Belle🌻💛

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Not like the others

I honestly went into this story thinking it’s just going to be another romance novel. But wow did you give us a plot twist!
I love where your going with this book. And must say please keep it up!
There are a few grammatical errors, I suggest proof reading, or maybe get a fresh pair of eyes to take a look. It would help increase the story’s appeal!
Keep it up! Can’t wait to read some more.
Xx
Belle💛

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Interesting start

The story line is a good start so far. The author describes everything and doesn’t leave you questioning “why??!”
Perhaps I may be premature by saying this! 😅 I would have liked to know more about the main characters, something to hook you into one from the beginning. A kind of “yeah I can totally relate to that character”.
Great first chapter, I look forward to reading more.
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💛 Belle xx

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Definitely intrigued

Your writing style and plot are really good. I however, found that in the first two chapters I struggled to keep reading, I’m not sure if it was a slow start or a little too close to home, but I’m definitely intrigued.
You’ve portrayed the main character as strong, whereby most of us can relate to her in some way or another.
I think the sentence structures need to be looked at a little. Maybe having a different set of eyes proof read after you have. But overall keep it up, can’t wait to read more of it.

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You Wouldn’t Dare

The thought process of this book is amazing. The writer is very gifted by captivating the reader within seconds. Drawing you in with the dynamic characters. Perfect combination of all the emotions of a relationship, anger, love, lust, frustration, trust, hope and most importantly devotion.

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