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Fantastic!
Honestly, I was drawn in by the teaser and I am glad I took the bait, This story was entertaining and had me reading right up to the end without hesitation. It's fast paced, clever, and a delight to read.
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MissGrey
The idea is a good one. I did enjoy how it was carried out, except for a few parts here and there that seemed a little excessive. However, this story was fun to read and I would recommend it to friends who are looking for a quicker paced story with an interesting plot.
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