MrBillyD

Huntington Station, N.Y.

When it comes to being a writer I see myself as an entertainer, and my stories are my performances. As an entertainer, I am a natural comedian and when I am writing fiction, this joker is wild.

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Surprisingly disturbing

I found this to be a very disturbing tale, about many people all over the world becoming catatonic, in what might be an attempt by extraterrestrial beings, trying to take over the Earth. What I found most disturbing was that I was unexpectedly drawn in to the frightened characters, and actually shared their feelings of dread. For me to have a reaction like that, means that this is an outstanding work of writing, which I would recommend (with caution) to anyone.

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Warslayer

This writing is somewhat confusing in places. The narrative suddenly switches from one unidentified place to another, and one unidentified time to another, without any transitional phrasing. It’s also hard to know who is saying what. The speaker is not identified before what he or she says is quoted, but at the end of the quotation.

This work was produced by someone who has very good potential as a writer, but is apparently not very knowledgeable about the basics of narrative writing. Anyone who might want some instruction when it comes to writing might find it helpful to check out:

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"The Pub Crawl"

A very entertaining and disturbing tale, about the beginning of an unexpected crime spree. Four women are barred from entry into a trendy nightclub by the bouncer. They decide to take vengeance on him. Things get out of hand. If this is only the first chapter to a longer story, I would truly look forward to reading more. It’s something I’d be reluctant to put down

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