This is one of the best pre-Potter stories I have ever read. I read it in two days. I couldn't get enough and I needed to know what was going to happen next.
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The introduction of Maya Night, the 5th unofficial/official Marauder was a graceful and interesting. She was the perfect fit into our beloved Marauders and you showed that seamlessly. Maya, truly is one of those characters that the reader falls in love with instantly.
It was funny, thrilling, exciting, touching, heartfelt and sincere. The interpersonal relationships of the characters were perfectly executed. The insertion of excerpts from the Harry Potter series was ingenious and well chosen. Each excerpt highlighted the chapter or section of chapter perfectly.
This story was masterly written, with only a few word and grammatical errors. I would recommend this story to any and ally Harry Potter fans who love the Marauders.
Maya Night is one of the most well-written original characters ever added to the wizarding world of Harry Potter and I thank you for creating her and sharing her with the world.