This was such a great musketeer story!! I really enjoyed the beginning section and how you portrayed Aramis' conflicted emotions about being led back into the fold; then how with subtle urging from Athos he admitted this was where he wanted to be anyway.
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I like your depiction of Athos as feeling uneasy in the skin of Captain. But what I really enjoyed was the interaction here between Athos and d'Artagnan, as Athos baring his soul is a rare thing. Your feel for the characters and how they speak was spot on. I could feel the warmth between them - much like father to son. And your ending rounded off perfectly - Aramis glad to back with his brothers.
Very well done!!!