MysteriousStory

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Good, I guess

As a writer of my own novel, I must say that I left so many character's lore unwritten because I keep rushing them in action. What's even weird is that their entire activity or the event sounds like an impromptu, like it was made for a plot but randomly filled for no reason.

What's even weirder is that I just realized that Linda is actually a human, who fell in love with Charger. The messed up things I just realized is that Linda fell in love with Charger, a monster without knowing he can be a human. She didn't know he can but she knew that Gabriel is not a human, which means she was ready to bang him as a tiny monster. I never intended to write that, I just wanted to make a slow but deep relatable story in my way.

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Amazing

Give me a wonder, what an amazing story...perhaps the story gives me an enlightenment

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Nice story

I like when story includes non-human as their character, I assume that whatever happens to them, I hope nothing much worse will happen. As some part left with cliffhanger.

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Is this thing worked? Oh good

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