

Good Story
Love the story and the plot, a few wholes here and there but it doesn’t take away from it. Grammar and spelling needs some work, but overall I love the story.
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I loved the story. I don’t think I have read a story in long time that made me cringe, cry, laugh, and get hot and bothered all while reading it. The depth of your characters is Astounding! Thank you for sharing.
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