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Plot
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Hard Tomatoes:3

Totally 10/10 feedback right here with hard tomatoes as the score but really it got me running; it got me jogging for a while; then to a sprint; then to a casual; then to a stop. A lot of things happened. Great read. Would except much for harder tomatoes though. All in all, group hug ~just do it.~:3
In numbers:

Positives (+)

Story 1:
1.6/3

Story 2:
2.5/3

Story 3:
1.15/3

Plot 1:
2.1/3

Plot 2:
1.11/3

Plot 3:
0.6/3

Identity:
0.14/3

Impact:
1.9/3

Innovation:
0.5/3

Execution:
1.1/2

Vision:
1/1

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14.9/30

Negatives (-)

Story 1:
0.5/3

Story 2:
0.1/3

Story 3:
0.4/3

Plot 1:
0.2/3

Plot 2:
0.9/3

Plot 3:
1.00/3

Style
0.5/3

Core
0.1/3

Elements
0.5/3

Cliches
0.15/3

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3.4/30

Neutrals (+ or -)

Progress (+)
2/2

Development (+)
2/2

Potential (+)
2/2

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Total
17.5/30 ;-totally did enjoy it-:

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