I first read the prologue, and began to wonder if this was a fact book, lol. The way it was written made me think of the history books that we're studying in school. I would call it an introduction, not a prologue... Other than that, I was blown away.
Read the story now
Most dragon stories are repetitive, but this one had something about it (The aura? JK) that made it seem unique. The names and characters were amazingly created, and the dialogue wasn't like a perfect comeback TV script, it was like normal everyday conversations.
Great job so far, I can see why u were chosen to be published!
One disappointment... I'm not that far, so correct me if I'm wrong, but I thought that the violet dragon was gonna bond with her. That would have been amazing...