Nathan T. Kenny

An Amazing Start!

Unfortunately, there are only about 20 pages, but I loved them all!

I am really intrigued by the mysteriousnes of the characters' appearances and it reminds me of Stephen King's writing style, where he leaves room for the reader to imagine the characters. A very nice detail. The dialogue is so rich and realistic!

The only minor things the author does is place commas as ending punctuation in dialogue where a period would be required.

EX:

"Well this is good," he smiled.

Instead of:

"Well this is good." He smiled.

(These are not in the novel but are just examples)

The style is phenomenal! Well beyond what most writers have! Well done!

This story will take Inkitt by storm!

A Wonderful Read!

So far, this story is developing into something wonderful. The mythology behind it only adds as flavouring for the plot, and that is something that will cater to many readers' tastebuds. The imagery is good, though, it does overdo itself at times.

The style I think is nice, but there are times where the author alternates between past tense and present. This is seen in some novels, but usually they have a consistency about them, whereas here I think the author just slipped. Other than that, it is refreshing.

The grammar is very good in the description with little errors here and there, but the dialogue is where I found common mistakes such as using periods instead of commas for closing punctuation and vice versa. There were also missing words and punctuation marks in places.

Overall, a very enjoyable read. I think with editing this could shape up to be something magnificent.

Good Premise But Boring To The Bone

I've read about 10 chapters worth of this story and found it impossible to continue. For me, the prose was overly boring and slow. It rambles on and on for a great deal of time. The paragraphs and chapters are way too long. And the grammar and typos were a problem, too (Please edit!)

I really did want to enjoy Roinad, but sadly didn't.

A Diamond In The Rough!

This book takes the reader on a well-planned journey, full of interesting, unique characters.

The worldbuilding will draw you in!

Can't wait to see where this goes!

Acrimonious

I thoroughly enjoyed this book. The author utilises rich and descriptive language to demonstrate a realistic yet interesting narrative. The characters are original and spectacular lights, living within the beautiful scenery that the author develops. The grammar is smooth, which gives for an easy read.

I recommend this story to Romantasy readers alike.

A Literary Gem!

I don't often read drama books, but this story intrigued me. The refreshing dialogue is something unprecedented in modern-day literature; it's fast-paced and descriptive. A great combination!

Although the plot does unfold rather quickly and the character development progresses along with it, I still found it easy to follow and was hooked from the opening page.

The grammar is pretty good, with only a few typos, choppy sentences, and misused terms.

Overall, a very good read and recommended to Romantasy readers!
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