Nathan T. Kenny

18 | Irish Author | Science Fiction and Horror Fiction | Eleven Years of Experience | Wattpad Below |

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A high-octane, intellectual adventure!

(REVIEW AT PAGE 55) This book is amazing, and I don't often say that about Fantasy stories because they tend to copy the same tropes and characteristic of one another. This, however, was very unique!

The style is fast-paced and descriptive, blending together both the showing and telling aspects of literature with great balance.

The story wasn't clichè, which is really good start! I love the way the author weaves the plot into the detail and pulls the reader into the story. This is always a strength to look out for in writing!

Very good read, and when/if I come back to it, I may update the review on my thoughts. But so far it is brilliant!

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An Amazing Start!

Unfortunately, there are only about 20 pages, but I loved them all!

I am really intrigued by the mysteriousnes of the characters' appearances and it reminds me of Stephen King's writing style, where he leaves room for the reader to imagine the characters. A very nice detail. The dialogue is so rich and realistic!

The only minor things the author does is place commas as ending punctuation in dialogue where a period would be required.

EX:

"Well this is good," he smiled.

Instead of:

"Well this is good." He smiled.

(These are not in the novel but are just examples)

The style is phenomenal! Well beyond what most writers have! Well done!

This story will take Inkitt by storm!

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A Wonderful Read!

So far, this story is developing into something wonderful. The mythology behind it only adds as flavouring for the plot, and that is something that will cater to many readers' tastebuds. The imagery is good, though, it does overdo itself at times.

The style I think is nice, but there are times where the author alternates between past tense and present. This is seen in some novels, but usually they have a consistency about them, whereas here I think the author just slipped. Other than that, it is refreshing.

The grammar is very good in the description with little errors here and there, but the dialogue is where I found common mistakes such as using periods instead of commas for closing punctuation and vice versa. There were also missing words and punctuation marks in places.

Overall, a very enjoyable read. I think with editing this could shape up to be something magnificent.

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Good Premise But Boring To The Bone

I've read about 10 chapters worth of this story and found it impossible to continue. For me, the prose was overly boring and slow. It rambles on and on for a great deal of time. The paragraphs and chapters are way too long. And the grammar and typos were a problem, too (Please edit!)

I really did want to enjoy Roinad, but sadly didn't.

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A Diamond In The Rough!

This book takes the reader on a well-planned journey, full of interesting, unique characters.

The worldbuilding will draw you in!

Can't wait to see where this goes!

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A Fantastical Start!

This book had me hooked since the opening chapter! The words the author uses to deliver their message are absolutely amazing! Although the plot does develop quite quickly, I found it both gripping and easy to understand.

The style could use a bit more emotion, as well as description in areas. But other than that, it was amazing!

There were quite a lot of grammatical errors, though, I still found it easy to read.

Definitely a story to look out for. If you love Fantasy, I highly recommend you check this out!

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A beautiful story!

This is a fascinating Sci-Fi that takes the reader on a journey!

The dialogue is so rich and realistic that it immerses its audience with ease. The plot is original and succulent, reminiscent of modern-day literature. It will certainly take Inkitt by storm!

The style is unique and flawless. It has the most well-defined style that I have seen thus far on this site.

The grammar is smooth and easy to read. There were very little errors.

Overall, a very good story and I can't wait to see where this goes!

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Acrimonious

I thoroughly enjoyed this book. The author utilises rich and descriptive language to demonstrate a realistic yet interesting narrative. The characters are original and spectacular lights, living within the beautiful scenery that the author develops. The grammar is smooth, which gives for an easy read.

I recommend this story to Romantasy readers alike.

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A Literary Gem!

I don't often read drama books, but this story intrigued me. The refreshing dialogue is something unprecedented in modern-day literature; it's fast-paced and descriptive. A great combination!

Although the plot does unfold rather quickly and the character development progresses along with it, I still found it easy to follow and was hooked from the opening page.

The grammar is pretty good, with only a few typos, choppy sentences, and misused terms.

Overall, a very good read and recommended to Romantasy readers!
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