NicholasScott

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Wonderful

My only problem so far is that it's just ONE chapter. Some might call that a teaser, personally I think it's just cruel.
I love your prose and the narration is wonderful. Great flow and timing, dialogue is awesome. the narrative voice is charming and captivating. I definitely would love to read more

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