NicknamedNanna

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Great, but now im crying.

I like how you added the depression. I actually suffer from severe depression and social anxiety and feel that it helped girls like me to connect to the story. The only thing I have to say is that the grammar could have been better, overall a fantastic job.

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Great! Just a few pointers...

Hi Ms. ViolentGodess! I loved your story, great plot and Jeff seem exactly like he is from the stories. The only pointer I have is that towards the end, the grammar began to slip a little. Great job though!

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Beutiful

Beautiful story I must say with a very happy and upbeat story line. I look forward to the next chapter.

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