This was a lot of fun to read. It read like a character study, almost, and a Bible study rolled into one. It's been a long time since I've read the Screwtape Letters, and I only read the first part, but you managed to make your writing sound like C.S. Lewis's writing style.
It also tested my Bible-story knowledge. It was fun to try and puzzle out which story you were referring to, before looking it up.
And before I forget - the names were well thought out, at least in my opinion.
All and all, I really enjoyed it, and I look forward to reading the sequel!
May the Valar guide your pen,
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