Gin

TOO CLOSE
Getting close to Damien was part of the plan.
Getting this close wasn't?
Chapter 17

I just unlocked the Scribe badge! 🚀

Once upon a time, there was a family.

By morning, there wasn't.

CHAPTER 13 IS LIVE.

Hi! I’m looking for honest and constructive feedback on my story, Perspective.
This is a personal writing project that I’ve been working on and improving over time. I’d really appreciate it if you could read it and tell me honestly what you think—not just about what works, but also about what doesn’t.
I’d especially like feedback on the story, characters, pacing, suspense, atmosphere, dialogue, emotional moments, and overall flow. If something feels confusing, rushed, predictable, unrealistic, or unnecessary, please tell me. Don’t worry about being too critical—I’d rather know what needs improvement.
You don't have to focus only on grammar. I mainly want to know how the story feels to you as a reader and whether it keeps you interested.
This is still a work in progress, so your feedback may help me decide what needs to be changed, expanded, or rewritten.
Thank you for taking the time to read Perspective. I genuinely appreciate your honesty.

She approached him to play a game.

He had no idea.

Or did he?

Chapter 12 is live.

🔥 CHAPTERS 9 & 10 ARE LIVE 🔥

Alice is getting closer.

A new name has surfaced... But where will it lead her? 👀

🖤 The Name I Came For

Chapter Six is live. 🖤

One man down.

The Name I Came For 📖

Hi Gin, thanks for the follow!

If you get a chance, I'd really appreciate any attention you might be able to give to my story ❄️Winter Of Wildermere❄️.

I really hope you enjoy the world and characters within it. It's a pleasure to have you along for the ride! 😁

If there's anything you need, or if you'd like some feedback on your own stories, don't hesitate to ask.

Welcome to Inkitt! 👍

I just unlocked the Pen Prodigy badge! 🚀