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Good story overall but I didn't like the ending...
I loved the story it was very good! I loved the plot of the story! It was a very addictive story that wouldn't let me stop reading! I did not like the ending thought....Don't get me wrong awesome story! I just feel like the characters suffered to much and deserved to be freed. I think it would have been better if the had actually escaped rather than just being trapped with more people.....Overall awesome story dude!
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