OneSizeToFitThemAll

Middle-Earth

I mainly stick to Lord of the Rings fan fiction. I am also on FanFiction.net as OneSizeFitsAll. Feel free to call me Gem. :)

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Good job!

I will be following this story!
The girl-falls-into-Middle-Earth idea is, of course, rather cliche, but I expect you have your own twist on that. I hope the fiance plot line continues...it adds a lot of interest to the story
Emma is a good, strong character, and I like how you introduced her personality in a way that made an impression right off the bat. I think that she will be easy to sympathise with, as the story continues, just as she has been so far.
It thought your dialogue was quite well done, as was the narration. Overall, good job!

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