Osidion

Charlotte, Nc

"To be fluent in the pen? Or to be fluent with the sword? That's the question. " I'm an aspiring upcoming author looking for beta readers

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Truth under the moon

This was a very entertaining short story. The setting is clearly set early. I like the character as well as the character development. Not trying to spoil anything, but I like the twist that was thrown in. To be honest, this short story reminds me of some of the episodes of law and order or even NCIS.

If you enjoy reads about law, order and mystery, then Truth under the Moon is definitely for you!

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Sange

Sange review by Osidion.

Snage. I found the first chapter: the massacre to be very interesting to say the least. I enjoyed the vast use of details that were included, it deeply helped with the imagery I was painting in my head as I read the chapter. It's a few things here and there that can be touched upon, but in my honest opinion its nothing that a proofreader or editor can fix. Overall without spoiling anything this story is off to a GREAT start!

I would definitely recommend this!

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In your direction

the short story was quite good. I typically don't read this type of genre, but I do have to say it was good. I like the writing style and flow. the story was a heady quick read that did its purpose to tell and entertain the reader with a short story

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Exit sign

To be honest, I don't typically read stories in this field, but let me tell you. Exit sign takes the cake!

What really locks you into the read is the writing style used by the author. I like how there's a lot of description / detail and you can tell the author really thought the story out.

Another think that I like about the manuscript, is how relatable the characters are, there problems, emotions and challenges they face and deal with dont seem to farfetched.

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Dysfunctional Butterfly

To be honest, I do enjoy poetry. Even though the poems were composed years ago, they are still fairly good. I like how they make you think, the wording is again good for something composed years ago.

All in all, Dysfunctional Butterfly is good and I recommend it anyone who is new, or just getting into poetry.

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The wolf queen with red fur

I like how the story starts off, an that the main character is female. I like to see women as the alpha in some fantasy stories; it gives you a different perspective at times in the story.

I definitely think this could be a good story

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Galactic wars

The Prologue to the story is truly awesome, it sets the tone and mood for the story leaving wanting to know what happens next instantly.

The synopsis of it is thrilling, if your into scifi fantasies. The synopsis make me instantly think of the old TV show "V" from the 80s.

The story is very short, but it has much potential to grow. I can definitely the direction that this is moving in

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Perks of being in love

I wanted to start this review off by saying that this book is definitely for females lol. But if that is for you then I definitely suggest that you look into this read!

Without spoiling anythin the story is set in a time that everyone has been once upon a time and can relate to. The character seems to be very down to earth and has problems that you may have had in your life 1time or another.

The story is easy to read and follow, and is written extremely well.

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Prehistoric Park, A new dawn



This was a very good short story it reminded me a lot of Jurassic Park but with a Twist without giving away any spoilers!

The read is greatly informative, giving you facts that you may, or may not know.

If you enjoy the Jurassic park movie series, or your just a dinosaur fan and want to read a short story then this read is DEFINITELY for you!!!

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