PJS

I write because no one has developed a 12 step program to help me to stop. My day job is advocacy for persons with developmental disabilities. I have a M.A. in American Studies.

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Waves break on unknown shores

A very imaginative thriller. I quite enjoy the way the book intertwined past events with the current situations. I enjoyed the characters more as i read it.

In one chapter a character talks about a major event in the past having a ripple effect. I think a minor rewrite starting with that concept and weaving it more clearly through out the novel would improve it even more. Also more attention to diatinguishing the speech patterns of the characters. Good luck with this fine work

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Flush: Red light. green light

The sentiment in this collection of poetry rings true. The poet's voice is unique in respect of style and substance. I especially liked the poem which included the bachelor's numbers. I think every woman who has been single and dating can relate to at least one of these scenarios and, yet, the scenarios each seem unique to the poet's experience. I really enjoyed it!

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