Patuma salimu

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Dear Fred

I love Harry Potter too and i gotta say thats an emotional letter.Its beautifully written and one can't help but feel sad over Fred's death again.Keep it up!

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Interesting

Apart from a few gramatical errors here and there i love your story.The descriptions are beautiful and you manage to create a mental picture of the elf kingdom.Just edit a few words and you good to go.Its a beautiful story and i cant wait to see what happens next.

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Well Done

I love your style of writing and the way you describe events.You have a unique way of creating suspense and i just can't wait to see what will happen next.This is an interesting novel and you deserve all the five stars.

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Interesting

This book is very interesting.At first i didnt understand the prologue but after reading i understood it.I love it and the way you describe Finch and the boys is really awesome.
Welldone.Cant wait for the next chapter

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Psychic

It just feels like im watching a movie.Well done guys.The way you describe Sunday and Alpha's psychic abilities is awesome and i will definately reccommend this story to others.Its interesting.

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Accidental Relationship

This story is unique.I just think that you are so creative in coming up with such a unique storyline.Im already loving the character of Alex.
Everything about him and Sierra is interesting.

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I hear you

This book is good.Woow.I found myself on the verge of tears.Starting from Ryker's treatment by his parents upto how his peers view him,its just so sad and as writer you managed to make someone feel something after reading your story.
This is an interesting book

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Diversity

I have always wondered why people with different opinions and skin colour get treated differently.By the end of the day we are all human and despite your skin color or where you come from.You matter.You have feelings just like every other person out there.This is a great book.Keep up the good work.

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Forevermore

I love how you alternate between The Count and Julia.Your story is flawless and i love everything about it,not to mention the way you describe places and the names of your characters.Everything fits perfectly and i can't wait to finish this book and move to book 2.

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Creature seers

Im already inlove with Ryder and the way you used the korean names for mom and dad just brought out my obsession about the language.I love how you managed to describe the weird woman and the kid.Overall its an amazing story and i love mythology so i know good book when i see one.
Keep it up

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Man of time

To be honest i was just browsing looking for a story and yours caught my eye.The description got me and before long i found myself reading.This a beautiful story keep it up.

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A Bit on the side

What i loved the most about this story was how you described the characters and events.It just gives a clear a picture of events and the fact that you used Nigerian names is a bonus.I can't wait to see what happens next.

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