Della

I write some cool stories and some not so cool ones but hey! I definitely love writing so hang in there for the cool ones, it might seriously grab your attention and hopefully your heart. ;-)

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Delightful!

I really love this! It's fun to read. I like the way each and every character comes to life just by reading, I really adore the character, Marcus. I like how I could feel his pains as if it was real -that's something most writers struggle with- I am happy you were able to achieve that.
Other than a few grammatical errors here and there -which didn't really affect my reading flow- I think this book is perfect and has a lot of potentials to go very far so keep it up!

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Very unique!

I really love this book, it such a great idea to write a letter to yourself once a year, i think I will try it.

I love Annie's character, she's super adorable! I love your writing style, it's simple, easy to comprehend, and very unique just like the storyline. Keep up the good work, I see so much potential here.

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I love it!

This book is fantastic! I can't express enough how much I enjoy reading it, and I hope to see more updates soon. You really rock!

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Fantastic!

Oh my God. This book surpassed my expectations; I really love how I could relate with most of these beautiful poems; it's truly heartwarming and beautifully written. Keep up the good work.

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Wow!

This is beautifully written! It's a very interesting story. The characters and their emotions were so beautifully describedβ€”it's truly heartwarming. There were minor grammatical errors but nothing obvious so I believe it's worth a five-star rating. I really love your book and I sincerely look forward to future updates.

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Nicely done!

This is beautifully written. A very intriguing story, nice writing style, and very descriptive. There are a few grammatical errors here and there but it's an easy fix. Overall, I believe this book is worth anyone's time. it's simply exceptionally good.

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Thrilled!

This is just wow! The storyline is very thrilling. There is so much mystery that I can't help but keep reading. I sincerely like your writing style, it easy to understand, and yet a little bit complicated but not in a bad way; well, in other words, it's simply captivating. I can tell you did a lot of work on the editing because I just couldn't find any flaws. So, I truly believe that this work merits a five-star rating. Keep up the good work!

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Outstanding!

To be honest, when I started reading, I never thought I would be this captivated. I really love your characters and Jake is my absolute favorite! I like his kind and protective nature, it's very endearing.
I absolutely love your storyline, it not boring. I like how you were able to capture my attention from beginning to end without flunking. Your Writing style is beautiful! Not complicated. very easy to read and understand, I appreciate that.
You have an amazing talent, and I can't wait to read the next update. I wish you good luck!

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Hooked!

This is a beautiful piece of art! I must confess, I am a huge sucker for a mystery, and this book has done well in satisfying my appetite so far; and for that, I think it deserves a five-star rating!

To be honest, I didn't really notice any flaws, I was too hooked with the story to do so :-) Anyway I will probably re-read to find out. But for now, I will say, I am a satisfied customer. Keep up the good work!

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Love it!

This is simply beautiful! I really love the cuteness of the main characters. I love the way you describe each and every emotion with a lot of passion, it's incredibly endearing. The storyline is very captivating, I love your writing style and I really see a lot of potentials here. I wish you the best of luck.

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Beautiful!

This is a great novel, I have really fallen in love with the storyline. I like how each of the characters and their environment is described with so much detail, I was able to imagine the whole thing without any problem and I sincerely believe, that alone really makes your work very enchanting.
I would suggest you break some very long paragraphs and also look into the punctuation marks; I noticed some of them were not spaced correctly. I believe this book has great potentials so keep it up.

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Just Brilliant!

The author has an amazing writing style, the description of each character, and their scenery, is just perfect. I'm really fascinated by this story, I sincerely want to know how it ends so please keep writing.
So far, I noticed no grammatical errors and I really applaud the author for that. I wish you good luck, and I am seriously rooting for you!

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Hooked!

This story is truly amazing! I could really relate to the character Jason King, it brought out so many emotions in me. I am really glad I read it.

Your writing style is awesome, very easy to understand, I love the way you describe everything in the book, from the emotions of the characters to their environments, it's just superb! Other than a few grammatical errors here and there, I believe this was an awesome read. Keep it up!

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Beautiful work!

This is a very nice beginning, It intriguing. I seriously what to know what would happen next. I am hoping you add more words to this chapter, it seems a little bit short for chapter one.
I love the writing style and how you took your time to describe the characters and their environment; it's really commendable, keep it up. I see a great novel in the making.

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Extremely captivating

This is so captivating. I love the way the writer expresses the emotions of each character. I love the descriptive aspect of the book, you could just imagine the whole thing and get the perfect picture; it super endearing. Other than a few grammatical errors here and there, all in all, it a most fantastic read. I believe this deserves a five-star rating. Keep it up! I see an awesome writer in the making. P.s. Looking forward to more updates.

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Super Awesome!!!

I am sincerely in love with this book, the writing style is just awesome! I must confess I haven't read a book with such a storyline before and I simply love it. I like Joshua, he reminds me of a friend of mine :-).

I so much enjoy the suspense, the slow progression of the story and best of all how descriptive the book is. I believe this deserves more than 5 stars and I will be definitely waiting for more chapters.

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Simply Awesome

A very interesting and captivating storyline. The book is very descriptive, you can't miss a thing if you've got an imagination and that alone is very impressive. The writer has a very outstanding writing style I just love it!!
Keep up the good work.

Ps: I am totally a huge fan!

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Incredibly Captivating

A most delightful read! The story really captured my attention. I find it most wonderful that the writer took a lot of time describing each and every character with so much life in them. All in all, the book was Awesome! And I will be recommending it to a lot of people.

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