Persephone Rose

Nicely done

I believe that the story was good and that the letter, in the end, gave it an emotional touch. The plot has the potential to grow into something more substantial. Maybe be more descriptive of the character's emotions? I like your writing style and believe that you have the talent to create more wonderful works. Keep it up!

Sweet and Savory

The Arrangement is a story that I believe the author crafted with much love and attention. I enjoyed how the characters weren't just one note, Artemis had this "playboy" feel, the twist on this was genuinely amusing and smart on the author's part. I love how Grace had this innocence but was still this confident and strong woman, an ideal match for our leading man. I loved their relationship and how it progressed. It felt very much real. The plot I feel could have used a bit more care. It seemed that it was straying from the original idea. But, I must commend the author's writing style and skills. If there were any punctuation or grammatical errors, they did not catch my attention. The story flowed and did seem to lag unnecessarily. The pace seemed perfect, for me at least. However, I felt like the ending seemed to be more of a halt. I believe The Arrangement is a labor of love - the author was dedicated and invested in creating a beautiful story.

A love letter to the broken!

A true testament of how love grows, of how it forms between two souls. Texting Him is beautifully crafted, you can tell Sage has put all of her thoughts, emotions, and dedication with each chapter. The main characters are created in such a raw manner that you feel that you are reading real conversations between two real people. I adore this story and this journey the writer has allowed me to take along with Sloane and Parker. You truly are a talented writer and from what I read you must have a beautiful soul. Never stop writing, never stop inspiring others with your work. I am truly grateful to have stumbled upon Texting Him.

Pure genius!

Cannon, The story between Nico and Khloe has captivated me since the first chapter. I instantly fell in love with the plot, the characters and your style of writing. I adore how you so beautiful craft every exchange between the main characters and their growing relationship. I laugh, I swoon and crave more with each chapter. You have created this world that has a hold on me, and I can’t thank you enough for it. NEVER STOP WRITING! In the words of Nico, “You have a natural talent!” 💖