Phala

I was home

I sat at my computer and drank my tea. I was reading this and I was home. It was that good. This is excellent. I hope you write more. This is fantastic. The characters were as real as I am. I could smell the sun and the dust. I was there. I was in church I could hear the singing. This is a book that transports me home. Thank you

Black and proud of it

I like your story. I think it can be very good. You must write more. I feel sad for the Mother and the Child. It is a hard life with no Father. Moving also is not easy. You are making it good to read that I can feel the emotion of the Child. I want to read more very much.