Pheonix

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Good story

Your story is very interesting and filled with suspense. I liked how the characters are messed up but still wanted to be there for each other. Surely need to work on the grammar. If the editing is done it would make a great story. And do update soon. Need to know what happens next.

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Good potential

The story was interesting. It kept me glued and I liked the plot. It was new and different of all the books I have read. The book has got great potential. Keep up the good work and continue writing wonderful stories

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Great Work

The story is very good and intriguing. Love the characters. The details are very descriptive and hooks you up in the story. There are a few grammatical errors. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to your story

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