Pipwusa

A mother who loves to tell her daughter a bedtime story, but also loves to tell people a life story https://www.instagram.com/pipwusa/

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Bittersweet

Your writing is pretty unique, the way you go details and giving readers the feeling like we were also there, witnessing the heartbreaking goodbye at the station.
I would say your chapter length is a little bit too short, it gives an abrupt cut when we want to go deeper with every person's sense and feeling since you tend to switch POV quite fast.
Keep up a good work!

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Intense vs Cute! I'm hooked!

This is not a usual demon-human romance story. This is light, sweet, cute yet insanely intense at the same time. The strong point is on the interaction between both main characters which are very entertaining. The dialogue flows nicely with a lot of cute banter. I love your sense of humor, author!

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Exciting Journey!

An interesting story about a journey of a girl in finding herself by tracking down her roots in their origin country.

I love it how the author reveals layer by layer of Sam's past (the MC), to create suspense and slowly the plots are getting thicker. Even though there is not a lot that happened yet (up to the chapters I read) I can see promising progress in this story.
I have yet to read what happens in New Zealand, it already excites me :))

The only thing I found a bit jarring is the fast POV switching at the beginning of the chapters. Maybe this issue can be fixed by giving distinctive sounds for every character. I know this is the hardest part of doing different POVs.

In general, this is an amazing story, and keep up the awesome work!

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My Heart Can't Take It

This is a romance story that will blow your mind away. When I read it, it felt like I was on an enjoyable boat ride in serene water and beautiful sightseeing. Very calming yet very sweet.

The story flows nicely with a very natural conversation. It doesn't feel forced or rushed. The author took her time to set up the world around the main characters before digging into their life stories, fears, and expectations.

I'm in love with Haze and his gentleman attitudes though I want to learn more about him as I still have some questions about him. I'm also in love with Penny with his jumbled mind, inner conflicts, and naughty thoughts (sometimes 😄), it makes her so relatable to the rest of us.

Can't wait to read the rest of their journey!

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I Love It!

After Romance, horror/mystery is my favorite genre. The combination of those is hilarious. What made this story special is how the author wrote it. It's effortless to read, with an excellent description, and a nice flow of dialogue. The author certainly has her way with words.
I have yet to read further to see how the mystery behind Liah's background will unfold little by little.
I notice some switching between past tense and present tense, but it will be easily fixed with proofreading.
Can't wait to read further!

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So Engaging!

This is wow! I loved how the story flows and the mixture of sweetness and sexual desire. I also liked the plots, this kind of 'forbidden' relationship is always intriguing. Anxiously waiting what's going to happen when Liam and Ceylan meet again.

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Amazing story

I loved the journey of Lucy and James from how they met to how they became a couple. The struggles of being a solid couple were pictured so well in the story. I admired how the author bring one scene to another scene in a perfect flow, it doesn't feel forced or pushed. Her writing style is very calm and shooting. Love it!

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I love it!

I'm rooting for Isabella finding the love of her life after a traumatic event in her life then being forced into marriage. I loved how the author slowly build the relationship between two leads through some awkward moments, surprisingly sweet encounter or through their banter. Well done!

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I can't stop reading

Very engaging. I love the concept and the plots! I love how intense Kali's and Rhys interaction. I loved also how the author shows a balance between description and actions. It's a fantasy genre but effortless to read. I love it!

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I'm Hooked

The story is sweet yet intense. I'm sorry for Ella who had to experience emotional abuse from her husband, and that she now struggles to overcome the fear of not falling into the same trap. The writing style is very good, the dialogue is natural and doesn't feel forced. I enjoyed this story very much!

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Out of the box!

I'm no fan of fanfiction but the story about fanfiction itself is definitely something else! I love the concept of the story. Very fresh and out of the box! I noticed that that author is taking time to build the world in the story before hitting the main plot, which makes it realistic and not feeling rushed. The dialogue is also very fun. Love it!

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Interesting plot

The plot is promising! I love how intense the story is, yet sweet at the same time. There is definitely some room in the story that can be worked on, but overall, it's an interesting read!

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ENTERTAINING!

Very enjoyable to read. The way the author writes is dynamic yet lovely! I love how full of fire the main character is, but also very caring for someone she loves, showing the complexion of her personality.
Love to see more to it.

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Very Engaging

I love how soothing and calm the author writes the story. It has a perfect amount of emotion and feels realistic. The pace is good, yet it didn't feel rushed. It's very engaging!

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Outstanding!

I love how the author thoroughly builds the world in this story: his childhood backstory, the trauma from 5 years back and now the current life Lesly has along with her issues. It made the character whole and so believable.
The way the author put emotions on every scene is also perfectly executed. Not to mention how natural the dialogue flows. This is the kind of book I would love to read till the end.

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What a Ride!

What amazes me the most is the way you write Ray's train of thought from one paragraph to another paragraph. It flows beautifully it felt like I was brought inside his head, experiencing its dynamic.
The way you describe how he develops feelings to both women, Gwen and Vera, was also executed masterfully!
I do want to see where you're going to bring this story.

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Damn

I can't stop reading till the end! I love it! And I live for this romance <3 <3 <3

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Intriguing Start!

I read the first chapter. It was intense and it intrigued me to want to know about what have happened and what will happen. Keep up the good work!

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