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Wolf's Treasure

This was an amazing story. The Author started out making you not sure about Benji, He was acting like a little kid. You start to root for Jason while the Author holds you in suspense throughout the entire story, and chapter after Chapter, you start rooting for Benji. A tip for the Author; It might be helpful to add Benji at the beginning when Benji's POV comes into play, other than that, beautiful job!

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Birth of the hound

The Birth of the Hound gave me nostalgia of the little stories I used to read in storybooks that always had a moral, or something like this. I enjoyed reading it. At first, I though Houndal(?) was going to open the bag, but as the maid pushed and he refused, It became clear to me who would open it. This was a very enjoyable story. Thank you for writing it!

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