Good Work So Far
I really enjoyed how you crossed all the Hannibal characters from every series together, it was an interesting twist and I haven't seen it before. I'm really interested in how you will play Clarice's involvement with the duo but conflicted because I really don't know what to expect lol. Using the omega/alpha was intriguing as well, although I'm curious as to the twin's name choices, not that I don't like them I'm just curious. Overall your take on the stories is very cool and I'd very much like to see the continuation of how this will all fold out. I will also say good job on some of the vocabulary.
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Only criticism I can really give is to watch your spelling, there weren't that many mistakes but just a few, and work on capitalization and punctuation use because sometimes it became confusing if a character was still speaking or stopped to have a thought.
In conclusion I hope you continue with this story because I do find it interesting. Thank you and sorry if anything I said sounded harsh.