PumpkinCreams

From Mama’s trash can.

🍒Poetry- Depressed Souls. 🍒Novels- Sunset Scar and maybe upcoming books too? No books are thoroughly edited. Pls bear with me. Loves everyone regardless. All pronouns are preferred.

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Beautiful

I love how all of these poems are unique.
It has a lot of beautiful imagery to them as well.
The grammar is perfect. The stanzas could’ve been divided into neater stanzas but overall. Beautiful!

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Awesome

Look, I will say it,” the plot is freaking awesome!”
There is so much tot his and damn!
I’m want more of this!
It’s beautiful!
Keep up the good work.
There’s a few tiny grammatical errors but it’s ok.

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Scary.

So, I’m not so into horror but this gave me more hope on to reading.

The plot is outstanding, grammar on point and even the editing is beautiful.

The only problem is that the book has huge paragraphs instead of small ones. This can create confusions amongst readers. But overall great book.

P.S for author

I’ve read around half of it before, I just didn’t get time to review it. Sorry for the late review but kudos for you!

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Understanding.

I love everything about this book. The fact that this author had the courage to even start the collection, is a sign of great strength. It’s perfect for teenagers and young readers too. You might want to put up a content warning heads up on each poem regarding self harm, eds, death and other things too. The smallest of all.
Great job author. Keep going. Love your works.

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Suspenseful

I loved this book overall. The main thing about this is that it is written in the killer’s perspective, that was a unique touch. I’m not so into thriller but I really did enjoy this book. I recommend everyone this. I was kinda shocked at the fate of the character tho🥲🥲🥲

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Depression in simple yet meaningful words.

Now, all of the poems speak one thing in general: Depression.
Something we all are afraid to open up about but know it all too well, sometimes.
I’m proud of this author to even start this.
The only thing I had a problem with was the punctuations. The commas were missing, that’s all.
The poem has meaningful phrases but it’s simple. Easy for young or new readers to understand.
I really recommend this book for anyone struggling with depression and self hate.
You’re not alone and, author, you’re amazing!
Pls do write more!

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Beautiful

I love all the poems in this.
Everything is so meaningful too.
Great job author.

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Bless you.

It’s a beautiful masterpiece of a young mind. Surely will recommend this for young readers.

Mashallah you’ll get where you want to go to.

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So far so good.

I have read just a few of these but I’m already hooked on it.
I really love the plot of this book too. The writing style is really good but I would expect for more depth. (If that even makes sense 😅) but anyhow, I love the first few chapters. I have already read close to three chapters.

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You deserve more!

There’s some grammatical errors but overall this book should be a must read.

The description of the characters, as most would see and agree with me, is just so ridiculously good.

The one problem is that the love between these two weren’t given much time.

Other than that this book is beautifully written.

Keep up the good work and guys pls do support the author, they deserve it.

I’m a fast reader hence, I finished this quick. I’m still hoping for more 😭😭😭

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Lovely.

The writing skills are on point, I haven’t read the entire thing but I’m really impressed by far.
The plot is amazing too. Keep up the good work.

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Great book.

Apart from the spacing, I loved and enjoyed the book. I am fast reader that’s why I have trouble with the spaces. Some rounds of editing and you’re done.

Fighting!✊💜

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Heartbreaking but serene.

Let me clarify.

🧡There’s some grammatical mistakes but you’ll get it done through editing.
🧡The meaning is not deviated off the lines.
🧡The poet can bring about the emotions in the readers.
🧡The depth of the poems are shallow enough for everyone, irrespective of their experience in reading poem, understand.
🧡I would love if the poet had some good recovery poems.

Overall, the poems are awesome. Pls do promote this. You deserve at least 15 likes on this. Come on.

Love, PumpkinCreams 🧡🧡

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Lovely

So, the plot is the best out of this entire thing but I see how you couldn’t put the creatures of your world into the play but rather had the main character narrate it.
Overall I see no problem in this book,
Keep up the good work 💜💜💜💜💜💜

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Not a sugarcoated review.

Ok so, I’m going to be honest.
There’s a bunch of grammar mistakes but you can get through it with editing.
The plot has great potential but I see that it wasn’t dragged much. I wish to see it evolve more.
The quotes used when someone says something is double quotes(“ “) not single(‘ ‘).
I didn’t understand why a fourteen year old has to be looked after.
It’s high school, so I understand why the friends are this way.
But overall, I loved this book and I’m hoping that you would write much more elaborately written works.
This book has good potential, just needs some polishing and you’re off!
Don’t be sad, this is a great story. Just some minor setbacks here and there but you’ll learn and make better content.💜💜💜☺️☺️☺️

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I love it

It’s really awesome and all of the poems have really good meaning behind each.

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Editing is required but you’re on the right track.

I love how you creative are. Now, this needs editing and before we put out our works, we have to be really careful. Then again, we may leave a few commas here and there. I am hoping for a whole book soon.💜💜💜

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Great potential but need some editing.

The book has very good potential to it. There’s almost nothing wrong with the plot.
The thing here is the commas and apostrophes for me. You need some editing and your off to go.
I’m not going to demotivate you by being too harsh. I’m not trying to sugar coat.
This book has great potential but needs some editing for the punctuations.
I really hope you make it far ahead in life author! 💜💜💜💜

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Realistic

The poet really writes poems that mean a lot.
She not only puts out deep, dark thoughts but actually is able to make the reader feel it.
I just love this book.
I hope a lot more people can see this divine masterpiece 💜💜💜

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Definitely an asshole

I love this book. The way josh is just an asshole to his family is fav. I am a rebellious kid and I just love pissing people off. But I’m careful tho. I love this book cause of Josh’s attitude. Keep going

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Beautifully written

Now, I’m not someone who would do vampires but I’ll say that this book has me hooked. I may have read just the few pages but it’s amazing. Hoping to find more works from you💜💜💜💜

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Oops

At first, I was like”EROTICA? Hmm idk about this…”

Then I read it and I loved it. Keep up the great work hun💜💜💜👏👏

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Must try

I like how you decided to put the plot. The girl is really innocent and then we have this really mean and complete opposite man. I can’t wait till they clash like hell. There’s no grammar mistake too and that’s a bonus. Keep writing more!!!!!!
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Inspiring

Honestly speaking,
Many poets have trouble keeping up with the meaning of the book in each poem but this particular poet has not failed to keep the meaning on going. The poet has no errors in the punctuation nor the spelling. There’s enough depth to it( a little more than enough but I love it). I love this book and I recommend this to anyone struggling with mental health and life.👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

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A must try for the least!

This book is amazing
The stanzas are efficiently divided
The meaning has not even changed once
I love the rhythm of the poet too.
There’s enough depth and meaning to this book
And I also love how this poet doesn’t put too much meaning or depth, to be precise, into the poems.
As a bookworm, I can say that this poetry collection is definitely worth a try!
I Love This! And I don’t regret even a bit of it💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

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