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Finished Chapter 35

Hippocrite is spelt hypocrite.

Also it is an awesome story! A good one after so long. I was hoping someone would write a good fanficiton playing off what Ron said at the station. You are doing a remarkable job.

It would have been interesting if Albus had also ended up in Ravenclaw though that might be too much of a copy of the original trio, so its better this way. Or if Albus ended up in Slytherin, which would have been so cool. Cause Harry was actually destined for Slytherin, except he chose Gryffindor.

The characters are so great! Hugo interrupting with the same talent as his father. Many of the characters are so on point!

Anyways, I reached chapter 35. I hope its not done it was so good.

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