Purplepink

Makati city pHils.

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You have a unique imagination. The phasing of the scenes is fine. I thought the second ending would be a sad one, but it is still okay and looks like u can add a sequel to it. There are not many struggles in the scenes, all were digested accordingly. The comical characters added are fitted and flavors your story. All in all, it is a nice imaginative story.

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polish off a prodigious amount of everything.

I like how the dialogues exchange with realism.

The plot switched was done accordingly.

It floats the whole exciting part in most of the chapter.

Some may be provocative at its sense,

but it is done with the accordance of its originality , I give it a thumbs up . The whole scenario of the devilishly part is interesting . .... how the author squeeze such imagination is somewhat marvelous . I do know it's a fiction but adding a quantum of realism would entice ( in my opinion) the readers such as me to read .

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