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2 Tim. 1:7 For God has not given us a spirit of fear, but of power and of love and of a sound mind.

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Impregnated by the Billionaire Book1

I like this book. You made an awesome characters in this book. I like how you put up a scene that can make the readers whirl their emotions, conversations that were mould into a perfect highlights in some of the chapters. The cliffs, and snippets of the flashback were done just the right blend to the story.

And the epilogue, again the cliffs are to die for😅this is by far a great ending to put on. Never imagine that Linda's character would blow my mind into how satisfying reading your story. Her character was simple yet speaks volume at the end. Infact this character even better than the Naomie's, she's somewhat a martyr which makes it noticeable and yes you got me on this last part. I feel my heart burned for her sad short live part with Ajax's life. I really do like the ending. This summed up all the answers to how and why things happened in the lives of the connected characters here. You did a good job. Well, I'm not much of writer nor an editor I can't pin point on any mistakes here if there was... the editor can tell. But for me this is a great book. As for the second book yes I definitely would follow it,because that Michael needs to learn to rock or shall I say... Gael will rock his world for good. God bless.

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Moments that define us. .

I like everything in this story. I may have read a similar like this but this surpasses my expectation. Simple yet it has volumes of sense where your heart would leap to different emotions because it gives that feeling of being in the scenes how the writer wrote vividly, incredibly out of the box. Simplicity ruled this but it has more to it. Good work.

God bless.

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message from an angel

You have a unique imagination. The phasing of the scenes is fine. I thought the second ending would be a sad one, but it is still okay and looks like u can add a sequel to it. There are not many struggles in the scenes, all were digested accordingly. The comical characters added are fitted and flavors your story. All in all, it is a nice imaginative story.

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polish off a prodigious amount of everything.

I like how the dialogues exchange with realism.

The plot switched was done accordingly.

It floats the whole exciting part in most of the chapter.

Some may be provocative at its sense,

but it is done with the accordance of its originality , I give it a thumbs up . The whole scenario of the devilishly part is interesting . .... how the author squeeze such imagination is somewhat marvelous . I do know it's a fiction but adding a quantum of realism would entice ( in my opinion) the readers such as me to read .

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Caged

First, I did enjoy your story. I was assuming it would somehow be about werewolves hence the title. The first chapter was packed already with the dramatic questions of which readers would aspire to read and unravel more about the characters in the succeeding chapters.

I already assumed mature content would be a hot sizzling one, I'm sure readers have detected the climax on that chapter (chapter3) nevertheless it was fair that it should be in that part though with or without it, it will still be fine.

I think I agree with sweetP31lover, few edits are needed, just refer to her review.

Chapter four, the cliff there was interesting to look forward to...You have a good story here, love romance, action, drama, are gonna be mixed in this story I assumed. But regardless of how you set it, I know it is going to be awesome in the long run. God bless.. and just keep writing.

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