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New Road

So far this book is Great, I'm 3 chapters in and its going great, a brand new look on the Harry Potter story, this has a lot of promise. If you're a nostalgic harry potter fan , a fan of magic and adventure or just a fan of good stories this is for you

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Almost perfect

The story is wonderful, no one would've put it any better. The love is strong though Hermione is sometimes a bit helpless. loved the way you portrayed Malfoy. But I think you broke the relationship between readers and most of the characters from the original story, but you managed the story well. Well done. Surely was an almost perfect read.

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harry and hermione

I loved the story. The characters are perfectly portrayed and really looking forward to reading other chapters of the book. There are some mistakes in your grammar but in all, this was great.

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